Today afternoon on time 4.00 PM. I went to meeting with my friends and one of friend, I don't saw her for long time was Love Ly or Tuk. She was one of friend when I studied in middle school, I miss her very much. She was beautiful girl and she very popular in the man. First we went to market at Wat Klongton, we walk to shop and talk together. Next we went to The Chacoal at Sampran to have Sukiyaki together. I forgot to introduce my member to join us. There were Aui, Aomamp, Tuk, Kuk and me. We started to have Sukiyaki for 1.30 hours, then we went to home and we had an appointment to pray at Wat Preedaram around 10.00 PM. However, we couldn't to meeting at Wat Preedaram because their were many people to make an activities for the new year eve, so I decided to make an activities before. The people and I made an activities together. First, we were listened morality tales, then we were prayed together. When finished, the other people went back home. My friends and I would like to meet master monk to talk and give souvenir. We talked very fun and happy. The time was late, my friends and I went back home.
Today was impressive for me and I wouldn't forget my memories.
I like your story and the story is interesting.
ReplyDeleteLove ly should change to Lovely
ReplyDeleteThis story is very interesting.
DeleteLovely is the name of my friend in Facebook. It is not vocabulary.
ReplyDeleteI believe, You can eat a lot of foods.
ReplyDeleteYou have some mistakes but the story is interesting.
ReplyDeleteThere are some mistakes in your writing. Please be careful using passive form.
ReplyDeleteand don't use v.ing after "to"
You hanged out with you friends. It looked fun.However,it seem like you have only girl friends,no boy.
we couldn't to meeting, right? meeting is noun. or I should to fix it that we couldn't to a meeting?
ReplyDeleteUm, I had my boy friends when I studied in high school because in the middle school, the boys are very bad in my school. It is true.
If you see my essays again. Please suggest me to fix them.
Do we have to edit the writing after getting the comments?
DeleteI think you just observe the mistakes but don't necessary to edit the blog.
I didn't edit them because my teacher wouldn't check the real correctly of grammar. However, I told you for check again.
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